James Lark on 9.20pm on Monday 25th February, 2008
Oh, James. Your pitch really needs work.
"Elsie is a fourth grade teacher"? I'm asleep already. "Elsie is a young, talented, beautiful woman who is bored with her job in the fourth grade" - NOW we're talking.
"...prompting Elsie to run from his killers, to Fort Lauderdale" - yawn yawn yawn. "Elsie runs to Fort Lauderdale AND HAS TO TAKE THE FOURTH GRADE WITH HER" - HOORAY!!!
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Oh, James. Your pitch really needs work.
"Elsie is a fourth grade teacher"? I'm asleep already. "Elsie is a young, talented, beautiful woman who is bored with her job in the fourth grade" - NOW we're talking.
"...prompting Elsie to run from his killers, to Fort Lauderdale" - yawn yawn yawn. "Elsie runs to Fort Lauderdale AND HAS TO TAKE THE FOURTH GRADE WITH HER" - HOORAY!!!